DargonZine | Volume 14, Number 2 |
rdelius Dobber knew that today was the day he was going to die --
and there was nothing he could about it. The gods above issued the
portents of life, and in his case, death. In the dark bells that had
passed the night before, he had prayed silently to Ol to change his
inevitable fate. His prayers had failed, for he had woken with an icy
cold grip of dread still clawing into him, its unseen talons piercing
his heart as his life force slowly seeped away. All that he had left was
today. He moaned weakly and rolled over in bed, his clammy face pressed
into the pillow, stifling the anguish he felt within.
"Delius!" Mona screeched just outside the window. "Get your breech
end out of bed right now and come and feed these pigs."
Ordelius pulled the pillow over his head with trembling hands,
clutched the shivaree's claw on the thong around his neck and rocked
gently. It was hard to accept that he would die on an ordinary day like
this, with his wife whining about the pigs being in need of their swill.
He groaned again and drew his knees up under the covers, hugging his
scrawny legs to his chest.
"I said *get up*!" The words boomed in his ears as Mona suddenly
barged into the room, plucked off the pillow and tossed the bedding to
the floor. Ordelius knew that Mona was not a woman to be trifled with.
Over the years she had become rather broad in the beam, and there was
solid strength in her akin more to an ox than a cow. Ordelius shrugged
himself upright and swung his feet onto the cold floor, ducking to avoid
the blow aimed in his direction.
"Turdation!" she cussed as she stormed out the door, grabbing a
bucket and broom on her way.
Ordelius sighed deeply and stood up. He tugged his nightshirt over
his bony shoulders and ran cold hands over his skinny body, checking
carefully for any signs of malady or disease. Mona had left her wash
pitcher on the stand. He splashed some cold water on his face and
half-heartedly raked the stringy flap of gray hair over his bald pate
before pulling on his breeches and threadbare shirt. He slipped his bare
feet into his mud-crusted shoes and turned towards the door. Pausing on
the threshold, he tapped the ground twice with the tip of his shoe --
once for health, once for wealth -- the little ritual his mother had
taught him in childhood. It seemed rather trifling this morning, but now
he was ready to face the day. His last day.
It had all started a sennight before, on a dark street near the
edge of Dargon, and on a night when Ordelius had perhaps had a bit more
than usual to drink. He had stumbled from the Shattered Spear -- or
rather, Jahlena had tossed him out the door because he had become rowdy
and impoverished at about the same time -- and had staggered into the
road just as the fourth night bell clanged in the distance. The world
had seemed a little unsteady around him and he had paused to regain his
balance. The air had been black and cold; each breath had burned his
lungs and made his head spin. The clouds had lifted, letting a bright
Nochturon shine down on him, and Ordelius had raised his voice in a
greeting, hailing the moon and thanking it for casting a light unto his
path. Then he had shuddered, overcome with the feeling that something or
someone lurking unseen in the shadows was watching him. He had looked
about, anxious, then had decided to hurry home, even if it was to face
Mona's wrath. That would have been all good and well, if it had not been
for the other thing that had happened on his way home.
"Delius Dobber!" Ordelius dropped his head and shuffled the bucket
of swill across to the pig trough as Mona's heavy stride approached.
"Skies above, Delius!" she exclaimed. "What in Stevene's name has
gotten into you?"
"Sorry, dear." He stared at her, recalling how nice it was to
snuggle up behind her and place his arm around her, cupping her full
breast in his small hand as he fell asleep at night. She had a familiar
scent about her, almost sweet, but with an undertone of warm spice. He
would miss that.
"You've been behaving very strangely." Her tone mellowed and she
reached out to wipe some splattered swill off his face. Her touch
reminded him of the days when he was courting her. It felt like a
lifetime ago.
"You said you would be getting these things to Sian." She was
clutching a cloth-covered basket. He did not want to be away from home
on today of all days, but this errand was important to Mona. Once an
orphan herself, Sian had used money left to her by her adoptive parents
to give a home to street children. Ordelius and Mona had been childless
throughout their marriage, and he knew that she had found some comfort
in providing what they could from their land for Sian and her little
ones. Mona took the bucket from him and gave him the basket. Ordelius
heaved a long sigh, then pecked her down-soft cheek and set off for
Dargon.
In truth, as he recalled, it had been an act of nature that dark
night that had signaled his imminent demise. After he had left the
tavern, he had felt more and more discomfort with each step, the result
of having drunk too many ales. A sudden rustling in the shadows had
startled him and he had increased his pace, silently telling himself
that it was merely the rats foraging in the gutters. He had felt a
growing sense of pressure and had hurried on until the urge to relieve
himself could no longer be ignored. With one hand fumbling with his
breeches, he had staggered over to the edge of the roadside buildings.
There was a tight, narrow gap between two of the walls, and he had
slipped in through it, gripped his bursting cod and unleashing a stream
of piss into the black night. In that instant, it was as if Makdiar
itself had sundered open. There had been a loud rattle and a feral grunt
as the ground beneath him erupted, buckling his knees and tossing him to
the dirt. A giant figure had risen up above him, blocking the moonlight
with an outstretched arm that jabbed violently into the blackness as he
cowered below. For just one moment, Ordelius had raised his head and had
found himself staring straight into the face of Death.
"Hello, Ordelius," a voice called from behind, bringing Ordelius to
the present. He spun around to face the caller and saw Sian crossing the
road, little Kerith tagging behind.
"Greetings, Sian." He extended the basket to her. "I was just
bringing this to you."
"Thank you kindly." Sian gripped the basket and lifted the cover,
spying the fresh bread Mona had baked and the burly-beans from their
small garden. "You should be blessed, you are such good people."
Ordelius swallowed hard and tousled Kerith's curls, wishing that
Sian's words were true, for he was not blessed, but doomed. The sun was
not yet fully high, but his hands were all clammy and he could feel his
shirt clinging to his body.
"You should stop by and see Mona," he said suddenly. "Bring the
children. She'd like that." Sian gave him a quizzical look.
"Of course." She put a hand on his shoulder and looked down at
Kerith. "Some of us would like to see the new piglets, wouldn't we?"
Kerith smiled shyly.
"I'd best be off." Ordelius looked down at Kerith's pretty face and
realized she had a whole life ahead of her. He only had today.
"All right, Ordelius. Tell Mona we'll see her soon." Sian clutched
Kerith's hand, swung the basket onto her hip and headed back across the
road towards Market Street. Ordelius watched until they turned a corner.
He felt hot and sticky, and his throat was very dry.
The memories flooded back. While he had trembled near the ground in
the dark alley, the putrid stench of the gaunt being before Ordelius had
overwhelmed him. The creature's eyes were sunken in its head, the skin
stretched taut across the emaciated face. It had raised a bony hand in
his direction and spewed evil-sounding grunts. The hand clawed in on
itself and he watched in horror as it twisted towards the creature's own
neck, mimicking a stranglehold.
Ordelius had pulled himself into a tight ball, afraid to face the
demon. His ears had filled with a frenzied rattling noise that echoed in
the alley. He had felt a cold, damp presence over his naked scalp and
had not waited another moment, but had scampered to the gap in the wall
and burst onto the road, his breeches flailing about his churning legs
as he raced homeward through the black night. Mona had looked up in
fright as he had crashed through the door, but after listening a short
while to the blubbering man in front of her, she had accused Ordelius of
being a no-good drunk and clobbered him solidly. He had spent that night
curled in front of the fire, listening to Mona's gentle snores in the
room next door, wishing that it had all been a horrible nightmare from
which he would awake in the morning.
Indeed, when morning came Ordelius had put the incident behind him
and had almost forgotten about it until last night, when he had returned
to the Shattered Spear.
The loud clatter from a wagon snapped Ordelius from his reverie. He
looked up, his chest tightening. He dragged his eyes away from the
shimmering blue heavens, fearful that his eyes would light upon the sign
that marked his pending doom. The sun was nearing its zenith, which
meant that the midday bells would soon ring out. For Ordelius, every
bell that tolled in Dargon this day rang with the echo of his funeral
dirge. After saying farewell to Sian, he had not returned home to Mona,
but had been wandering through Dargon's streets, on this, his last day
alive. He had been down to the docks to smell the brine of the ocean for
the last time. He had listened to the water lapping gently against the
dockside and watched screegulls swooping down into the waters after
hidden prey. He had followed a trail of voices and stopped to watch the
flurry of activity in the market place. It was so alive, with the sounds
of people talking and haggling, and animals squawking and squealing. He
would have gone to Temple Street, but he doubted that the Euilamon and
priests would have any answers. As he had paced through the dusty
streets of Dargon, he had come to a realization: he had met with Death
in the alley that black night and, from that moment, he should have
known that his days on Makdiar would end soon. All it needed was a sign,
and it had come, last night.
It seemed fitting that he was now standing in front of the
Shattered Spear, for it was here that it had all begun. There was a
gnawing feeling in the pit of his stomach as he ran his tongue across
his parched lips. He pushed the tavern door open and went inside, and
smiled forlornly at Jamis, the tavern owner, who was already decanting a
tankard of ale for him. Ordelius sank into his regular seat close to the
grimy window. A buxom serving woman brought the tankard, not caring that
she sloshed the dark liquid onto his lap as she set it down before him.
He gulped it down.
"I want something to eat," he said. She waited mutely on him for a
few moments, but when he did not elaborate, she walked off, leaving him
to stare blankly into the distance.
It had been right here that he had heard the news, on the night
before. Ordelius recalled that he had felt a strangeness in the air as
he had slipped out the cottage door and hurried to the Shattered Spear.
The tavern was crowded and he had scrunched himself into a corner close
to a huddle of burly sailors while quaffing his ale. For the most part,
his attention had been on the young wench serving them; each time she
had leaned over the table to pass down another tankard he had caught a
glimpse of her brown nipples peeking from the lace bodice. The little
thrill that it had given him made him tingle until he had heard one of
the sailors say, "It is a strange light -- I swear it -- up in the sky,
glowing like fire."

There were rumblings and murmurs and guffaws around him, but
Ordelius had felt his chest grow tight. The sailor was getting annoyed
at his skeptical audience.
"All right!" he had boomed, "If you don't believe me, step outside
and look for yourselves."
Ordelius had felt a hard lump swelling in his throat as he waited
anxiously for the sailors and other tavern patrons to get up and
accompany the sailor to the door. He had spilled out onto the road with
the rest of them and looked upward.
The dark shapes of clouds scudded across the starlit night,
blacking out Nochturon's yellow glow.
"Stupid buffoon," a man had yelled and slugged the sailor who had
dragged them out.
"No ... look ..." An unknown voice had caused them to fall silent
and stare at the strange light that was now clearly visible. Ordelius
had stared at the light. If he had ever doubted that he had met Death,
he could be certain now. The sign he had secretly feared was burning in
the night sky, and only he knew what it truly meant.
"A bowl of soup." There was a thud as she plopped it in front of
him and Ordelius looked at her.
"Thank you," he said politely. She looked at him and gave him an
encouraging smile, then walked off. Ordelius lifted the spoon to his
mouth and slurped in the hot broth. It had no discernible taste -- no
doubt made from the leftovers of last night's tavern fare. It was hot,
but not hot enough to take away the chill in his bones. She was suddenly
back with another full tankard.
"Would you like some stew instead?" She had deep blue eyes, and on
any other day Ordelius would have been happy to drown in their depths.
"The soup is fine." He clinked the spoon on the full bowl. "I am
not that hungry."
"It's been awful quiet in here today," she said, "on account of
that strange light. People just want to be home."
He was not in the mood to talk about the strange light.
"Some say it's a bad omen," she continued, trying to engage him in
eye contact, "but others say it is the birth of a new god." She waited
expectantly for him to say something, but even after another good swig,
Ordelius's throat was too tight with fear to speak. She walked back to
the counter, swishing a cloth over her shoulder.
Ordelius shifted uneasily on the bench. He was the only one who
knew the truth: that Death had no words, only signs and deeds. He had
fouled Death and such an evil act alone could have an awful result. From
the moment he had seen the light in the sky last night he had known that
it spelled his doom. He downed the last dregs of the strong bitter
liquid, burped, and took a mouthful of soup. He thought about his life.
There had been too many days spent here in the tavern, drinking, and not
enough time spent at home with Mona instead. Ordelius sat mutely, his
body trembling violently. He wondered briefly if he should go to the
healer who lived on Atelier Street. Raneela, he thought her name was.
But he doubted that she would see how the hand of Death had reached
inside him and was tearing him apart. His chest burned, his arms tingled
and his jaw felt rigid with the fear that crept through his body.
The crackle and sputter from logs in the tavern's great hearth
brought Ordelius back to the present. He realized that it was getting
dark. Soon Death would be here to claim him. Ordelius shivered. He had
hardly touched the soup, and now it was cold and lumpy. He set the spoon
down and took another half-hearted swig of ale, letting it dribble down
his chin. An icy draft swept through the tavern as the door swished open
and closed behind a new patron. Ordelius looked up, but the stout man
was a stranger to him. He turned away and took another deep slug of warm
ale. The serving woman crossed the tavern and stopped just short of his
table, reaching up to light a torch on a nearby wall. The last rays of
daylight had faded outside. His head jerked at a new sound that had
intruded into his thoughts. He had heard that noise before. A tap. A
rattle. A tap, then a rattle. His eyes grew wide as he peered through
the tavern window into the encroaching night. He raised his hand to
brush away some of the mire on the murky glass pane. Staring back at him
he saw the cold waxen features of the creature from the dark alley.
Suddenly he was cold, so very, very cold.
Raneela looked weary as she approached the scrawny little man who
was slumped over the table, his hair trailing in the soup bowl in front
of him. There was a small cluster of onlookers next to the serving
wench, who was blubbering about how he had looked all funny when he came
in and that he had been drinking and hardly eating and drinking more,
and then he had just keeled over.
"I bet it was the food that killed him," Raneela joked, but the
humor was lost on the stout lass who bolted away, tears spilling down
her face. She looked away from Jamis, the tavern owner, and the faces of
a dozen or so curious drinkers as she slipped her fingers under the
floppy head and held them there for a mene.
"Waste of good time," she shrugged with annoyance and turned away.
"There is no healing to be done here."
Someone tipped Ordelius Dobber onto the bench, straightened him as
best they could and covered him with a blanket as Jamis walked with
Raneela to the door.
"Be off with you!" Jamis shouted to a dark form that was skulking
in the shadows outside the door. They watched as the giant robed figure
scurried into the night, grunting under its breath, a bony hand stabbing
at the air and pointing skywards.
"Who in turdation is that?" Raneela asked, clenching her nose to
expunge the rotten stench the man had left in his wake.
"The Death Rattler." Jamis spat into the dark. "The man can smell
death. I swear he scavenges for dead bodies at night. Probably kills a
few live ones too."
Raneela looked up at the night sky as the ball of light cast a
trail of fine sparks behind it. She had been kept busy ever since it had
appeared, with wild-eyed men and women at her door begging for herbs to
ward off this unlikely portent of evil. She wondered how anything that
beautiful could be feared by anyone.
"Why didn't you throw him out?" she asked Jamis, jabbing her thumb
in the direction of the prostrate form on the bench.
"Felt sorry for the puny little runt. His wife's a real tyrant."
Jamis sighed and bid the healer farewell.
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