DargonZine | Volume 19, Number 5 |
ar away from any shore, a small sailboat drifted on the Valenfaer
Ocean, its sail missing, its mast broken. In it lay a man in ripped
clothing and with a ragged appearance. He was clutching a bag along with
a belt that bore the insignia of a bard. Too weak to lift his head past
the railing, his eyes stared blindly into the clear blue sky. He wished
for rain, for that was what had kept him alive during his ordeal;
however, during the last two days, not a drop had fallen. His dry tongue
brushed over his even drier lips, tasting salt. A sigh escaped him and
for a mene he closed his eyes, awaiting death. When he opened them
again, he saw a large fishing boat. Not trusting his blurry vision, he
thought he was hallucinating, and then voices reached his ears.
"Captain!" a screeching voice sounded. "Captain, there's a man in
that boat!"
"Looks like he's still alive!" somebody else added hoarsely.
"Then get him on board!"
The man's vision failed and he felt himself lifted over someone's
shoulder and carried upward. He was laid down on the deck of the fishing
boat. Helping hands tried to get him to sit, but his muscles wouldn't
cooperate and hold him sitting. He slumped back down, his head hitting
on hard wood. Drops of fresh water dribbled in his half-open mouth. It
tasted like nectar to him and he smacked his lips. He tried to lift his
hand, but found he couldn't. His eyelids fluttered and he saw several
men standing around him.
"What's your name?" one of the men asked.
The man tried to say "Kal," but only rasping sounds escaped his
throat and then he passed out.
"Kal, come over here. See what I've found," Simona called out and
waved her hand. Her long black hair was unbound and being blown in the
wind. Her white tunic had grass stains. As Kal came closer, he could see
her blue eyes sparkle in the sun. He reached out to take her hand and
pull her close, but found he couldn't get a hold. Suddenly, Kal found
himself standing in the middle of a clearing, alone. Simona was nowhere
in sight.
"Mona!" he called and began to run. He tripped over a root and
fell. Kal got up and rubbed his knees. As he looked around, he realized
he wasn't in the woods, but in a ship's cabin. "How did I get here?" he
meant to say, but only inarticulate sounds came out.
The door to the cabin opened and a black-haired boy entered. Kal
was reminded of his own youth upon a ship.
"Captain," the boy called out. "He's awake!" The sound of heavy
boots on wood came nearer and a broad-shouldered man stepped inside. He
wore blue pants and a brown tunic, which was fastened by a rope. A full,
black beard covered most of his face and made it difficult for Kal to
judge the man's age.
"Thank you, Sam. Why don't you go and bring a bowl of fish stew for
our passenger here."
"Aye, captain," Sam replied and scurried out of the cabin.
"You finally decided to wake up. It's only taken you three days,"
the captain stated. "Do you have a name?"
Kal made another futile attempt at speaking. He placed his hand on
his throat in an attempt to tell the captain his voice wasn't working.
"You're mute?" the captain asked. Kal shook his head.
"You do know your name, straight?" This time Kal nodded.
"Here, write down your name." He handed Kal a piece of charcoal and
pointed at the board on the wall. Kal shook his head and handed the coal
back.
"You're unwilling to tell me your name?" Again, Kal shook his head.
"You can't write?"
Kal nodded.
"But you carry the insignia of a bard and your sack of belongings
contains a lyre and a flute. Are they yours?" Kal shook his head at
first and then nodded, a tear in his eyes.
Sam entered without knocking and placed a bowl in Kal's hand. Kal
gave him a grateful look and a smile.
"When you're done eating, come on deck. Everyone here works. We can
use an extra pair of hands to gut and salt fish." Kal nodded again and
began to eat.
For the next fortnight, Kal spent his waking bells gutting fish and
placing them in barrels of salt. His skills as a sailor and fisherman
returned quickly, which pleased the captain. Every night Kal lay in his
hammock and dreamt of Simona. It was the same dream every time. He was
chasing after her. Unable to reach his beloved, he tripped and fell.
Every morning he found himself on the floor, much to the amusement of
the others. When he finally had a voice again, he answered to the
captain's satisfaction the questions about how he had ended up in the
sailboat and why he carried the belongings of a bard with him. He didn't
lie to his rescuers, but he didn't tell them that he had helped Simona
steal a statue for the purpose of throwing it into the sea and thereby
saving a town from a curse.
A sennight later, the ship returned to its home port. When the
first shouts of "Land ho!" had reached his ears he felt saddened. He
didn't want the voyage to end. While the crew had gazed upon the shore,
Kal had directed his view to the sea where Simona was, ignoring the
passing land. He longed for her and more than once had he considered
jumping overboard in the middle of the night. Each time his own
cowardice had prevented him from following through.
Kal had been so absorbed in his thoughts about Simona that he
hadn't paid any attention to where the vessel was heading nor had he
bothered asking the crew where they were from. As he glanced towards the
town they were approaching, something about the harbor struck Kal as
familiar and he looked at it in surprise. It had a striking similarity
to his former hometown, yet it was different. Ten years had passed since
he'd last seen his hometown's harbor from sea. This harbor had a larger
dock area and some of the buildings he remembered were no longer
visible. Could this be the town he had left so many years ago? Kal
swallowed hard.
"Hey, Kal!" The captain's voice sounded angry. "Everyone here helps
docking the ship. Move it!"
Kal jerked around and nearly tripped over his own feet. Some of the
crew laughed. He gave them a twisted smile. Moments later, he was busy
tying down the sails. By midday the ship was tied at the dock and the
unloading began.
"No, it can't be Armand. It's just another port," he thought as he
stared at the docks before assisting the crew. He shook his head briefly
and then focused on his work, banishing all thoughts about his hometown.
As soon as all the barrels with salted fish were transferred onto
the dock, Kal was called into the captain's cabin. He was surprised to
receive pay for his three sennights of work and a job offer.
"Where are we?" Kal asked the captain after he had pocketed his
earnings.
"Armand," was the simple answer and Kal felt the blood drain from
his face.
"I will consider your offer to hire on permanently, but first I
have some unfinished business to attend to," Kal said and turned to
leave the captain's cabin.
"We'll leave for our next trip a sennight from today. If you decide
to sail with us, let me know within three days and then report for duty
the night before."
"Thank you." Kal bowed. He walked back to his sleeping place and
picked up his bag. He was back in Armand, his hometown. "Of all the
places on Makdiar, I had to end up back here," he muttered as he made
his way down the gangplank.
Kal walked along familiar streets for over a bell before he
realized in which direction he was heading. As he set foot in the street
that harbored his parents' house, he hesitated, debating with himself
whether or not to proceed. "I might as well find out now if they're
still unforgiving." Taking in a deep breath, he continued on.
The house looked just as he remembered it: reef grass grew over the
tiles on the roof, the fore garden had a single rosebush, and the rest
of it was various herbs. The blackberry bush he had loved so much as a
child still grew along the south side of the building. Two boys were
playing in the front yard. He was about to address them, when they
looked up and then hurried inside the house. He smiled. Kal thought
briefly of his younger sisters Keana, Kaylee, and Koryn and wondered if
they were still living with their parents. Kal walked up to the door and
knocked.
"Who's there?" a female voice asked. Kal smiled.
"It's Kalanu, mother," he answered. "May I come in?"
"We don't know anyone by the name of Kalanu." A harsh male voice
responded from inside. "Go away and don't come back!"
"Father --"
"I don't have a son by that name!"
"Father!"
"Begone!"
Kal dropped his chin to his chest and stared at the ground. He
briefly considered pleading with his father, but decided otherwise. It
wouldn't make a difference. As Kal stepped away from the house, he heard
his mother arguing with his father, but to no avail. "I should have
known better," he thought. "Father won't forgive me, ever. I could have
spared myself, and mother, the pain of returning." He wiped a lone tear
from his face.
Kal made his way back towards the docks. For a while, he considered
staying at the Harbor Inn, but then he remembered that just about every
sailor who didn't have family in town stayed there. Not wanting to
socialize with rowdy seamen and answer their questions or get involved
with one of the barmaids for the night, he decided to seek out the
Broken Barge, one of the better taverns in Armand and further away from
the docks.
It was close to nightfall when Kal opened the door of the tavern
and entered. The room was filled with people. He was searching for a
place to sit down when he noticed a man alone at a table. The man was
dressed in traveling clothing: brown pants, white tunic, and a
sleeveless, brown vest. His brown hair was shoulder-long, with bangs
that covered his eyebrows, but didn't hide his blue eyes. As Kal came
closer, he noticed the man wore the pendant of a bard. Kal swallowed
hard and tightened the grip on the bag he was holding. He closed his
eyes for a moment and thought of Simona.
"Sit down and join me," the man said and pointed at one of the
empty chairs. "My name is Tray."
"Thank you," Kal replied and sat down. "I am Kal."
"You look like you have a story to tell, Kal," Tray said and
gestured the barmaid to bring a tankard of ale.
"Why do you say that?" Kal looked directly at the bard.
"Everyone has a story to tell. I'm traveling to collect these
stories so they won't be forgotten. Many of the men here have shared
their adventures already. I also see you carry a bag containing a lyre,
yet you are no bard, nor do your hands know how to play the instrument.
Straight?"
Kal looked at his hands as if he hadn't seen them before. The ropes
on the ship had left their mark, as had the knife he'd been using to gut
fish. His hands still carried the smell of salted fish. He nodded.
"Would you care to share your story?" Tray pressed on.
Kal thought, "What do I have to lose?" He reached for the tankard
of ale the barmaid had placed in front of him, took several sips, and
continued his thoughts. "Father still harbors his grudge, which means I
probably won't be able to hire on next sennight. By then the captain
will have heard all about me and won't have anything to do with me. My
father will make sure no one will give me work here."
"I will share my story. It is not just my story; so many others are
part of it. I will need time to tell."
"Take your time," Tray encouraged him and then announced with a
loud voice, "This young man here is willing to share his story."
Within a mene the noise in the room quieted and everyone looked at
Kal. He picked up his tankard and drank more of his ale, then took a
deep breath and began to speak.
"I am Kalanu. I have a story to tell. I'm no bard, but I will do my
best. My last name? It's not important, not anymore. Not since my father
disowned me and threw me out of his house. That was a decade ago. I
haven't seen my family since.
"My hometown is Armand, this beautiful port right here by the
Valenfaer Ocean, where the Grenweir River finds the sea. My father was,
and probably still is, a fisherman, captain of the Bountiful Catch. I
was his only son and so he took me to sea with him from the moment I was
old enough to hold a knife and gut fish. I thought I was destined to
follow my father's footsteps and I made every effort to please him, but
it was never good enough. I wasn't the best in mending the nets, and I
wasn't the fastest in climbing to the lookout; in fact, I wasn't best in
anything, and I couldn't win any competition. Father saw this as a
failure and always let me know I had to do better.
"My father had one obsession, which was to find and kill a beast he
called Misting Blinder. The way he described it, the beast was the
length of ten fishing boats and blue in color. With one wave of its
tail, it could sink a ship, and when it opened its mouth, it could
swallow the entire catch contained in the largest net. The beast was
able to spray water in a way that it would blind the people on a ship
long enough for the creature to vanish into the depths of the ocean.
Father claimed that he had lost his catch more than once to this beast
of the sea. Neither I nor the crew could confirm his story. We hadn't
seen the beast.
"Inwardly, I laughed when father told the story of how he had first
laid eyes upon the beast, and so did just about every sailor in town. No
one else had ever seen such a creature. But things changed when a crew
of eight entered the tavern my father was in and told a similar story.
He organized a hunting party of three ships to search for the beast and
take it down. I was in my sixteenth year and tried to persuade my father
not to go. 'If the beast is truly as dangerous as you describe,' I
argued, 'then we should run from it.' Father called me a coward. I
didn't want to go, but father forced me.
"We had searched for over a fortnight and were nearly out of fresh
water when a creature surfaced next to our ship. It was the largest
creature I'd ever seen. Its eyes were tiny, only about the size of a
curled up cat, compared to the rest of the body; its mouth ran the
entire length of our ship. I stared at the creature and it stared back
at me. Then it sprayed water from the top of its head and I was soaking
wet, so was every other man standing nearby. It got their attention.
Suddenly, there was a lot of running and yelling. Everyone but me got
busy readying the large harpoon they had put on the ship for exactly
that moment. The other two ships turned and soon we had the beast
encircled. To me it looked like the creature was watching us with
amusement. It opened its mouth and that's when I noticed that the beast
had no teeth. Instead it had something hairlike hanging from the roof of
its mouth. It looked like it was laughing at me! It was then that I
realized this was no dangerous beast.
"I ran to my father and tried to stop him from pulling the trigger
on the ballista and prevent him from launching the harpoon, but it was
too late. Almost simultaneously, all three ships sent their harpoons
into the creature's back. As if to punish me, the creature shot me a
painful look, bucked like a horse that is throwing its rider, and dove
under, its back bleeding.
"When I saw the pain the beast was in, I took a knife and cut the
line attached to the harpoon so it dropped into the sea. In retrospect,
my reaction had probably been our salvation, because the creature took
the other two ships with it, and all but a few hands were lost. My
father, however, didn't see it as our saving, but as the reason for our
failure. He argued that if our ship had been attached as well, the beast
wouldn't have been able to pull the ships under. In his opinion, I had
failed him again, and so he disowned me, threw me out of the house, and
ran me out of town.
"I had no idea what to do next. I wouldn't be able to set foot in
my hometown for a long time; my father made sure of that. It hurt, not
to be able to say good-bye to my sisters. I miss them, especially Keana.
We were close ..." Kal's voice trailed off and for a moment was silent.
Wiping his nose on his sleeve, he continued.
"I decided to go to Magnus. At first I followed the river, hoping
that further up I'd find work, but it seemed that my father's influence
was greater than I had thought possible. I gave up and turned my back on
the river. I would have loved to travel by boat, but none of the sailors
or fishermen would give me passage in exchange for work. So I walked,
living off the land. I nearly starved before I found wild berries and
nuts at the edge of the forest. I didn't know how to set traps for
animals, start a fire, or cook; that was women's work, at least in my
father's eyes, and so I hadn't learned the skills my sisters had.
Eventually, I crossed paths with a traveling monk who taught me to set
traps, skin an animal, cook, and, most importantly, how to make a fire
without setting the forest aflame.
"I arrived in Magnus about a year after my departure from Armand. I
had learned to steal what I needed and made use of that in the city
until I found work with a smith named Nai. He told me I was too skinny
to work the hammer and anvil just yet, and so I spent two years tending
to the fire and polishing the swords, knives, and other tools he made.
"Many of Nai's customers were bards. I admired these people and
loved to listen to the stories they told and the songs they sang.
Whenever time permitted, I went to the marketplace, where I was sure I
could find a performing bard. It was on one of these outings that I saw
her, a beautiful black-haired girl, a student at the College of Bards.
She was at the place of punishment, with a whole group of students,
witnessing the hanging of a woman who had been accused of killing her
own child. Instead of watching the execution as I had intended, I
watched the girl. She seemed appalled and broke into tears after the
deed was done. It wasn't for another two years that I would come to find
out who the girl was.
"In the meantime, I continued to be Nai's apprentice. I had no
talent, and I knew it. I could barely fit a horse with new shoes. Why
Nai kept me, I never found out. Nai had a wonderful wife and they loved
each other. When she became pregnant after long years of being
childless, Nai was beside himself with joy and wished for a son. What he
got was a daughter, but not for long. Nai's wife died in childbirth, and
a sennight later the baby followed. Grief-stricken, Nai neglected his
duties and took to drinking.
"I tried to keep the smithy up, but without Nai's help there was
little I could do, and soon there were no more customers. Nai didn't
seem to care, so I packed my bags. I waited for Nai's return from his
latest drinking binge to tell him I was leaving, but he had a surprise
for me. Not only did he return sober from the tavern, he also brought a
black-haired young woman with him. Her lips were painted blue to match
her eyes and she wore the insignia of a bard. I couldn't believe my
eyes. It was the girl from the market: the one I hadn't been able to
forget since I had first laid eyes upon her two years earlier.
"Nai introduced her as Simona Molag and informed me that she'd be
traveling to Dargon and he intended to accompany her. He invited me to
travel with them. There was no doubt in my mind that I'd be joining
them, and I asked for our departure time.
"Simona answered that question. Her voice left a melody in my mind.
I barely slept that night. My mind was thinking of ways to make her
mine. Simona kept her distance though, and slowly our threesome turned
into heartfelt friendship. I found out soon enough that Simona was on a
mission. She had been separated from her mother and twin sister, Megan,
when she was only six years old and was searching for them. Our journey
was filled with obstacles. Every time Simona thought she would get some
information about the whereabouts of her mother and sister, she was
disappointed.
"It took us almost a year to travel from Magnus to Dargon. Simona
was close to giving up hope of ever finding her family when we spent the
night at Spirit's Haven, an inn in Dargon. May, the owner of this inn,
was able to tell Simona that her sister Megan was on her way to
Hawksbridge. She had lived at Spirit's Haven for several months with her
injured husband, Raphael. After a fight with her husband, Megan had left
with May's daughter to visit relatives.
"We continued our travels, this time knowing which direction to go.
Simona had been happy and we made good time despite the onset of winter.
We were somewhere in the Darst Range when we lost our way and arrived at
a tower in the middle of the forest. The place looked like a
battlefield. An old man and a young boy were dead. A cat sat on the old
man's chest; it seemed to cry. A bit further lay another man with a wolf
at his side. Sitting close by, with her back leaning against the tower,
was a red-haired woman, barely breathing. Simona ran to the woman's side
and cradled her in her arms, sobbing. She had found her sister. In the
last few menes of her life, Megan told her twin where she could find
their mother.
"Heartbroken, Simona cremated her sister as well as her sister's
husband and the other two dead people there. Neither Nai nor I were able
to ease her pain. We continued our journey to Hawksbridge, where
Simona's mother was supposed to live. For once we were lucky. When we
arrived in town, the local midwife Elena showed us the way, and we had
no problems finding Anna. Nai and I watched from afar as Simona met her
mother after nearly sixteen years.
"We spent the winter and spring in Hawksbridge, and Nai showed
quite some interest in Anna. Simona and I took to the woods on occasion;
however, most of the time, Simona set off alone. She carried with her a
bag of scrolls on which she documented her knowledge of a curse
affecting her family. Nai and I spent time fixing up Anna's house and
chopping firewood. My skills as a hunter hadn't really improved in all
the years, so Nai set the traps. I was happy, thinking I could live in a
town like Hawksbridge and settle down, maybe have a family. I was still
hoping that Simona would be mine one day, and with Nai showing so much
interest in Anna, that hope grew stronger each day. I -- we should have
never left Hawksbridge. I should have stopped her!"
Kal picked up his tankard of ale and emptied it halfway. His hand
reached for the belt in his bag and he pulled it out for everyone to
see. He stared at it for a moment and then placed it on the table in
front of him.
"Keep talking, I want to hear what happened next," someone in the
audience said.
"Continue on!"
"Straight, continue on!"
Kal took another sip of his ale and placed the tankard back on the
table next to the belt. His fingers stroked over the fine leather of the
belt before he rested them on the buckle. His voice quivered slightly as
he resumed his story.
"Simona insisted we take a trip to Northern Hope. She came back
from one of her solitary trips into the woods determined to leave her
mother's house. She wanted to find a mage to lift her family's curse.
Simona convinced Nai to stay behind with her mother and help her with
the harvest. She had wanted to be back before winter. And so we set out
to Northern Hope. For the first time since our arrival in Hawksbridge,
Simona donned the garments that identified her as a bard.
"I was thrilled. I got to spend several months with Simona, away
from prying eyes and awkward questions. I took my chances and succeeded.
Finally, the girl of my hopes and dreams was mine. In my mind I planned
ahead, planned for the time we'd be back in Hawksbridge. Nothing would
ever come between her and me. The trip to Northern Hope took a sennight
longer than anticipated; the closer we got to our destination, the more
accidents we experienced. We lost half of our food supply, Simona
slipped and slid halfway down the mountain, and I injured my ankle,
which slowed us down, but we still reached the town. Simona had
explained that she needed to find a powerful mage to help her lift the
family curse.
"Anyway, once we arrived in town, Simona found the mage Anarr. I
wasn't too impressed with him. He was conceited, arrogant, and certainly
wasn't able to help Simona. When we approached him for assistance, he
yelled at Simona. He brushed her off in a manner that would have forced
me to duel had I any skill with the sword. All I could do then was stand
back in frustration. Simona didn't give up and managed to actually talk
to him and he told her he'd try to help her after the town festival.
Anarr had been able to lift the curse from Northern Hope and the people
celebrated. Simona gave a wonderful performance at the festival. At the
inn where Anarr was staying he took Simona to his room and tried to lift
the curse, but he failed. So he asked her to accompany him to Kenna with
his hired hand Edmond. I wouldn't have stayed behind, even if he'd tried
to keep me away.
"Edmond seemed more concerned with a statue he was transporting and
the mule he was guiding than anything else. During our first days of
travel, Anarr spent all of his time with Simona, talking to her. He
brushed me off every time I tried to come closer. One of the nights, he
took Simona into the forest for another attempt to lift the curse. I
tried to follow, but Edmond held me back. I gave in, knowing that if I
ruined it for Simona, she might not forgive me. Nonetheless I felt
angry, frustrated, and most of all jealous. How would I know if Anarr
only had honorable intentions with my beloved? I didn't trust that mage,
but she needed his help. I prayed to Stevene that he would be successful
this time, but when I saw the two of them emerge from the forest, I knew
he had failed again. Worse, he looked all sweaty and frustrated and was
walking stiffly. I feared the worst and Simona wouldn't answer me. I
tried to comfort her that night, but she wouldn't let me. When I touched
her face, it was all wet. Hot anger rose in me.
"The following evening we arrived in Kenna. Anarr again only had a
snide remark for me and I was about to take him on, but Simona stopped
me. I think Anarr was trying to leave me behind, but Simona insisted I
come along. We left the next morning for Dargon. Anarr had booked
passage on a river barge for all of us. We boarded and seated ourselves
at the front of the boat. It was my first time back on a boat since my
father had thrown me out.
"Anarr again spent a lot of time with Simona and I spent my time
with the crew. It helped; I wasn't feeling quite as useless and jealous,
and I got to watch over her. Anarr tried for a third time to lift the
curse, but failed again. I was glad to see him leave the barge the next
day, but at the same time it hurt to see my beloved suffer. Once Anarr
had left, all sorts of mishaps befell our traveling companions on the
barge. I'll spare you the details. The day we arrived in Dargon, the
barge hit the causeway and broke in half. The causeway itself collapsed.
So many people died that day or were injured. Simona found out it had to
do with the curse Anarr had lifted off Northern Hope and the statue
Edmond had brought with him to Dargon. It had to be warded in order to
be safe and somehow the warding was gone.
"Dargon got its share of misfortune over the course of the next
couple of days. Anarr was nowhere in sight to lift the curse again.
Simona and I figured out where the statue was and decided to remove it
from Dargon to prevent further accidents and mishaps. We succeeded in
obtaining the statue as well as a sailboat and took off. I don't
remember how long we were at sea when we got into a storm. The wind kept
pushing us further away from Dargon and I worried that our food supply
would run out before we could reach land again. The storm got worse and
I was thinking it would be a good time to get rid of the statue and told
Simona. She said we needed to get even further away, but I felt we were
far enough away so Dargon would be safe from the statue's curse. It was
then that a huge wave washed over the boat and Simona and the statue
fell overboard."
Kal swallowed hard as he remembered his futile attempts to find
Simona and pull her back on board. It was as if the sea had mocked him
by showing him her face repeatedly, yet keeping her out of his reach. He
reached for his tankard and emptied it.
"How did you survive?" a voice from the audience asked. Kal looked
up, but couldn't identify the speaker.
"I don't know how long I drifted. The mast had broken and without
sail and oars I had no hope of making it back ashore. A fishing boat
found me and its crew were kind enough to take me onboard. After I had
somewhat recovered, I joined the crew until we arrived back here. I
debarked and went to my father's house, but found that even after a
decade, he still denies my existence."
"What will you do next?"
"I'm not sure," Kal replied. "I had hoped to hire on the ship that
found me, but I have doubts that the crew will still want me, once
everyone knows my story. My father's influence in this town may still be
as strong as it was a decade ago. There is also the matter of my friends
in Hawksbridge. They deserve to know what happened to Simona."
"Why don't you stay with us?" A blonde woman in a green dress
stepped forward and Kal's eyes went wide.
"Keana? Is it really you?"
"At least you still recognize your sister," Keana grinned and
embraced her brother. "Just know that not everyone here thinks like
father, and many men owe their lives to you. When you cut that rope you
freed the ship and the people on board were able to come back home. My
husband Jeffrey here owns the inn; his father is one of those men who
survived that hunt for the beast. You can stay with us as long as you
like! I know mother will be delighted and maybe in time father will,
too."
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